An Unexpected Adventure (MMGM)

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Title: An Unexpected Adventure
Author: Kandi J. Wyatt
Publication Date: September 18th, 2018!
Page Count: 189 (PDF)
Age Recommendation: 8
I received this book in exchange for a review! Thank you so much!

Protect their community or protect their discovery?

For eighth graders Chace, Harley, Will, and Cherise, that’s a life-changing question after they find a dragon’s egg while hunting for thundereggs on the beach. Toss in summer jobs, family struggles, and a National Security Agent, and their summer vacation just became complicated.

Can they find a solution that won’t leave their hearts broken or their community in flames? ~ From the publisher

This book was…cute. Eighth graders, about to enter highschook suddenly find a dragon egg on their island town?! My two favorite fantasies combined into one! Plus, the government gets involved too!

I enjoyed Harley, the main character’s monologue, mostly because he had the most outlandish thoughts and didn’t seem to understand common sense. It was pretty cool how they found the dragon, and at some points I was  really intrigued with the whole mystery surrounding the professor. However, this book had a bit too many of my pet peeves.

First off, the plot was driven by the characters making bad decisions. One after another after another. The refused to listen. When someone offered to help them–they actually said no. But when you think about it for more than five seconds, you can tell that the person’s intentions were sincere.

The plot, when not driven by poor choices, was shakily explained at best. It had potential to become a sort of awesome mix between The Sister’s Grimm and The Land of Stories but instead it ignored the most interesting (if somewhat cliche at this point) part of the story to focus on the other point.

The story did a lot of telling, and little showing. I never really got attached or understood how deep Harley’s friendships were. The same thing happened with his friend’s characters overall. They said that they were one way, but we never got to see them that way. What especially bothered me about this was the fact that he was so ‘attached’ to the dragon but he hardly seemed to ever bond or spend time with her.

Another thing that really bothered me and stood out to me was that the book said, in a somewhat different manner, that ‘boys don’t cry’. This is such a damaging stereotype and it hurts so many males out there. Crying is valid and it doesn’t make you any weaker or less manly. Crying is a human reaction. Maybe if suppressing his emotions was a part of Harley’s (non-existent) character arc, it would have made sense to say it. Instead it was something that was randomly just thrown in. Normalizing this belief that harms so many people on a daily basis and long-term, is not ok.

There were also a surplus of unrealistic events in this book that I don’t even want to go into. An Unexpected Adventure is not a boring book, but it is a frustrating one.

Quotes!

“Sure wish someone’d fix that.” Chace rubbed his chin where it had bumped
against Cherise’s seat.
“You know what they say about the school not having money.” Will
shrugged.
“They’re going to have less when they have to replace my tooth,” Chace
grumbled.

“What’s up your sleeve, Harley?” she replied.
I looked up my t-shirt sleeve exaggeratedly. “An arm?”

“We found a rock on the beach on Saturday,” I said, scrambling for a plausible excuse.

What Does the Cat Think?

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Live, love, dragons!

I give this book 3 stars out of 5!

I also reviewed a different book by the same author! Click here to read it!

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10 thoughts on “An Unexpected Adventure (MMGM)

  1. I’m crying now… just kidding. I love the cover on this one but would probably share your hesitations with the plot. I might give it a try if I have nothing left on my stack of books to read. Thanks for the great review.

    1. XD The cover is absolutely stunning!! I love it so much. Unfortunately, the story didn’t live up to the art. It would be a good read if you had nothing else to do and were looking for a simple read. Thank you!

    1. I think the cover will draw readers! My insights may have more thought put into them than the average young reader looking for something to read lol. Just my opinions though. Thanks!

  2. Ah, eighth grade book characters… I don’t remember the last time I read a book with characters that are younger than me! And why does eighth grade seem like eons ago?? I am totally turning into a tea-sipping, wool-cardigan wearing old lady at this point 😂 I enjoyed reading your honest opinions on this book — it’s definitely frustrating to read a book where we find a lot of problems with the writing or the plot development, but I suppose a positive way to look at it is that we at least know what *not* to do with our own writing. Keeping that in mind has gotten me through reading a lot of books that I felt were meh. 😊 Great review, Sue!

    1. Eighth grade seems SO long ago but it was just over a year ago for me 😰. I try to shy away from reading about younger characters because it makes me feel old 😂
      That’s true! You can learn from your own mistakes AND other peoples’ too haha. That’s a really good strategy actually, I’ll keep it in mind. Thanks!

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